Send me your problem User Story with a little context and I will craft a story for you then email it back to you.
I can't promise a perfect story but a fresh perspective just might help!
My name is Michelle, I am an independent software developer. In the field, I have worked with Agile methods and tools.
I'm not an Agile expert but as a developer, I’ve seen some horrible examples of User Stories because people were trying too hard to get it right, define too much and be too technical. This is unfortunate because, a User Story is a powerful communication tool when done well.
Get the User Stories right and you can use them every step of the way to make sure you're giving your customers what they want so they want to buy your product.
I'm aiming to have a StoriesInView iPhone/iPad app in the App Store around May/June.
If you have any questions or comments about StoriesInView please do not hesitate to let us know via email hello at storiesinview.com